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Window to the Fire

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Assignment: Create a drawing that features a blend of the human skeleton and flesh that's not violent or gory in any way.

Medium: Vellum markers and prisma ink pens (oh goodness it was so tedious to make that wood pattern with those teeny little markers D: )
Image size
1220x1772px 2.16 MB
Make
PENTAX Corporation
Model
PENTAX K100D
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
38 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Apr 30, 2012, 6:44:24 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

In my critiques I like to break each rating down to provide the most detail so please bear with me through the process <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Vision : Your vision was astounding! Such a surreal image in a beautifully still environment was filled with grace, elegance, detail, and composition as you turned this into something original and almost a touch whimsical.

Originality : Although not being the most original (realistic art is well realistic art to me) It has a lot of smaller details in it's originality! For example, I enjoy the way you can only see the chest in focus, that composition is striking and centers the eyes on the photo frame there.

Technique : The way the water is still around her was gorgeous, and very enjoyable, it's still and serene looking like you froze the moment in time, on the smaller note of a critique side, the image seems to be a bit... "stiff" the ripples around her have a soft delicate form but it appear as if she was standing in a liquid that was denser than water, such as pudding, water has a more fluid look to it.

Impact : I was captivated, intriqued, and held even more by your attention to detail and compostion. Bravo!